The Missing Marks Chapter 2

[fantasticjackie]

Title: The Missing Marks Chapter 2
Author: patriot_jackie
Rating and Warnings: PG-13 for future violence
Prompt: Signature
Word Count: 3,933
Summary: One year after becoming an Auror, Tonks is presented with her first real case: the mystery of a series of signature crimes marked by a countdown of obsidian crystals and strange notes. - A series of

Comments

[shimotsuki]

I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I do hope you continue it when you get a chance. The mystery is intriguing, and I like the look you're giving us into Tonks's introduction to the Order. I especially liked the way you handle Tonks and her confusion from the Ministry propaganda -- after all, it must have been persuasive if so many people were swayed by it.

[fantasticjackie]

Thankies! I've wanted to explore Tonks' arrival to the Order for a while now, and with the R/T plot I've got in mind for this fic, it fit in well.

I wanted to go further in depth with the Ministry propaganda, but then I didn't want to place too much importance on it seeing as how this is a mystery and that wasn't something I wanted to follow up. I did want to mention its persuasive power, though, and I'm really glad you liked that.

I am continuing it. Once I've gotten the third chapter typed, I'll be posting the whole fic to ff.net and my journal. ;) Thanks for the encouragement!

[phe_o]

Wow! What an intricate plot you're weaving! I am breathlessly awaiting more! :)