Showdown Fic - Coniston Water (1/3)

[joely_jo]

Title - Coniston Water (1/3)
Author - joely_jo
Rating - R for adult sexual content in the final part.
Characters - Remus/Tonks, plus a couple of minor OCs, but please don’t run screaming, none of them are called Mary.
Warnings - Sex. I should probably warn for an initial dose of angst, as well.
Prompt - Grey
Word Count - This part weighs in at 4,426

Comments

[katyhasclogs]

Beautiful. Just lovely. I was mesmerised.

You conjure an atmosphere brilliantly. I look forward to reading the rest.

[joely_jo]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If everything goes to plan I should be posting the next part in a couple of days.

[shwenny]

Wow

Beautifully written. The words just seemed to lull me into the story. The calming atmosphere so much like the photo.

Loved it can't wait to read more.

[joely_jo]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I haven't written R/T in such a long while, I had my reservations... so it's pleasing to know they were unfounded. More should be along in a couple of days, all being well! :)

[oneandonlysusan]

I really like the way you write.

I'm looking forward to reading more.

[joely_jo]

Thank you! It's been a while since I wrote R/T, but it was something I felt I had to write before the book came out. I'm glad you enjoyed it. More should be up in a couple of days! :)

[mrstater]

Oh, this is so lovely and atmospheric, and as others have said, reading it is just like being lulled on a wave. I could go on reading more of this for hours and hours, so I'm very glad there's more of this story.

It's really uniquely told, with so much being said without actually having been spoken. Can't wait to see what the morning will bring. ;)

[joely_jo]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was nicer than I thought to get writing R/T again, so thanks for running this and pulling me out of the woodwork, so to speak.

There's definitely more to come, hopefully in just a couple of days (I'm just waiting on a beta), and a pleasant resolution.

[jesspallas]

Ah Coniston. It can be so atmospheric when the low cloud starts to creep over the hills and you've captured both it and the characters beautifully. The idea of the bite creating a rift between Remus and his father is an interesting one. Looking forward to more. :)

[joely_jo]

Oh, I love the place, too. And the family memories have come in very useful, I have to say! I'm glad you enjoyed the read - it's been a challenging write, but one I'm glad I took on. More, hopefully, in a couple of days. :)