Hermione is Getting Married, Part I

[wildmagelet]

Title: Hermione is Getting Married (Part I)
Author: wildmagelet
Rating & Warnings: T, warnings for mild sexual references and a bit of swearing
Prompts: Magical Object: Talking Mirror, Characters: Ginny, Hermione & Snape (sort of), Verb: Break, Genre: Romantic Comedy
Word Count: 12,871 (so much for short and succinct this time!)
Summary: T'was the night

Comments

[peverell]

:LOLOL:

OH buggering hell--you do an excellent Tonks! I love the tone of her and the understated way she puts things. I giggled and sniggered my way through this, thoroughly enjoying the characterisation of everybody.

:falls back giggling:
Xia

[wildmagelet]

Giggling is good. :) Giggling is a huge relief! I got the same genre prompts as last time, drama and romantic comedy, and didn't really want to write another angst-fest, but I haven't tried romantic comedy in a while. I got to about halfway through and I was like, "This isn't going to be "comedy" to anyone else. This probably won't even be comedy to me once the cold medicine high wears off." So, yes, giggling is good, thank you!

And I'm really glad that you liked the characterisation, because that's probably the most important thing to me when I'm reading fic.

[redonthefly]

"Hullo, I'm getting married."

*snicker*

I'm going to leave a full review in the second half, but I thought you'd like to know you have a fragment sentence in the 11th paragraph after the '6 hours earlier' bit.

I can't wait to finish this!!

[wildmagelet]

I'd like to say that I'm more like Tonks (jolly and unsteady on my feet) than Hermione when I've had a bit too much to drink, but I'm not sure. Repeating myself and talking a lot of nonsense sounds about right!

Thanks for catching that, too. I've got a bit of editing to do on it before I post it anywhere else. I tried to proof-read before I posted, but I was getting a bit close to the deadline and had fuzzy computer eyes. =)

[anonymous]

This was wonderful