Title: Control Author: rosedemon Format: Ficlet 865 words Rating: G Summary: The thoughts and fears of a person can make a person lose out on something special. Genre: Fluff. It is Valentine’s Day, for pity’s sake.
Really enjoyed the dialogue in this; as soon as Tonks offered him a scone you know she's going to set him right and it's lovely how she does so. I especially liked the "purring!"
It's nice to see that all that sober talking to he's given himself beforehand doesn't last that long at all. I liked the hint of Marauder Remus who can't resist a challenge himself at the end!
It almost seems as though Remus' doubts are acting as a protective mechanism, that he's using them an excuse not to hope, so the moment Tonks makes her typically blunt advance, he's ready to let his guard down. Nicely done.
Heh. So very Remus, trying to talk himself out of what he's feeling. Good thing Tonks is willing to hit him over the head with it! Of course, once she makes it into a challenge, he couldn't possibly resist. Nice!
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It's nice to see that all that sober talking to he's given himself beforehand doesn't last that long at all. I liked the hint of Marauder Remus who can't resist a challenge himself at the end!
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