Complicating Things

[lady_bracknell]

Title: Complicating Things
Author: phe_o
Format and Word Count: Ficlet, 692
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: Remus seeks to maintain the status quo while Tonks insists upon rocking the boat.
Genre: Romance

Comments

[jenulus]

Great take on the "Will You" prompt...

Really loved (and laughed at) this line: “How could I,” she smiled at him coyly, “when this side of yesterday your ever-doubting mouth was plastered across mine?”

OMG-- ever-doubting mouth is such a great phrase, especially when placed in the context of kissing... excellent job.

[phe_o]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D

[kerrymdb]

Ah Remus and his logical arguments. Good thing Tonks wasn't having it! Very cute fic! :)

[phe_o]

Thank you!

[quasilucidity]

I love the "ever-doubting mouth" line!

And hooray to Remus' logic, and Tonks' counter-logic!

[phe_o]

Thanks so much! :)

[freakinwinky]

Lovely, sweet and adorable. Both Remus and Tonks are increadibly in character and I agree that the "Ever-doubting mouth" line was brilliant. It applied very well to Remus and was an extremely Tonks thing to say. Great job!

[phe_o]

Aw, thanks so much for the lovely review!

[eshesh]

Awww. So cute! I enjoy stories where Tonks gets the best of Remus by not being reasonable!

[phe_o]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!