Comments | metamorfic_moon: A Snowy Day

gilpin25 in metamorfic_moon

A Snowy Day

Feb 12, 2007 08:23

Title; A Snowy Day
Author; jesspallas
Format and Word Count; Short fic, 541 words
Rating; PG
Prompt; Love Bug
Summary; For me, love is like…well, it’s like today. No, no, no, that’s not what I mean. I know it’s Valentines today, but love isn’t all chubby cherubs and dancing hearts. Yeah, I’m glad too! No, love is like outside is right now. It’s like a snowy ( Read more... )

romance, lovers' moon fic jumble, jesspallas

Comments 14

bratanimus February 13 2007, 21:26:20 UTC

Very sweet. I like that Tonks can recognize love in all its different permutations and, not only that, but manage to communicate her thoughts to a teenager in love, as well. Nice images. :)

auror_ithilien February 14 2007, 05:58:42 UTC

Very cute. The analogy is great.
Favorite line:
"And Remus has called me many things, but never anything viral."

gilpin25 February 14 2007, 15:31:53 UTC

I thought the one-sided conversation idea worked very well - giving lots of info about Tonks, Remus and Ginny. It's a really good idea, nicely executed, and clever how you've used the prompt, the metaphors, and lines such as Weather the storm and you'll be fine... which applies to both couples. :)

molly_coddles February 15 2007, 06:01:33 UTC

Remus has called me many things, but never anything viral.

LOL, thank goodness Remus has a better way with words.

Ginny and Tonks have a lot of great conversations, I think. Good job!