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Hear the Angel Voices

Dec 24, 2006 15:32

Title: Hear the Angel Voices
Author: wildmageletFormat: Fic ( Read more... )

wildmagelet, angst, drama, romantic comedy, christmas moon fic advent

Comments 28

devonwood December 24 2006, 03:44:07 UTC

This was so serious, and yet I was smiling by the ending. I think this story covered about all of my emotions. :) Once Tonks mentioned the 'coupons', I immediately thought that Remus was going to get her an x-rated present. And I was not dissapointed. That was very hilarious, and a good way to take the serious edge off of things.

“How many times… Honestly, Remus, we were having a moment there..."

I loved that last line. It just captures Tonks perfectly. :D

wildmagelet December 28 2006, 03:40:10 UTC

I'm glad that it left you smiling rather than depressed or rolling your eyes. I was more than a little worried about how this fic was verging on the melodramatic. I prefer writing a bit of angst to all fluff, but I find it really hard to do without it sounding like a bad soap opera! :)

Thank you so much for your comments! They made my day on Christmas Eve and I meant to reply right away. And I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it.

redonthefly December 24 2006, 09:52:37 UTC

I love the symmetry in this peice, and the detail you have woven into it; it's very very well done and put together. I'm a fan of your Remus/Tonks stuff, and this certainly did not disappoint! And the last line is so perfect for the characters... :)

wildmagelet December 28 2006, 03:41:48 UTC

I was hoping for symmetry, but worried that it was just coming off as repetitive, so thank you very much for the reassuring comments! :)

I'm incredibly relieved that you enjoyed reading it and thank you again for the lovely review.

kileaiya December 26 2006, 03:02:40 UTC

Given the way they would start nervously and exchange nervous smiles whenever she walked into the room, they were either planning her gift or indulging in a torrid affair.

OMG, that line is all kinds of brilliant! I think you win for funniest line in the advent, possibly ever.

And dude, Laura, I hated you there for a minute! It was all nice and fluffy then BAM TEH ANGST! But the ending made up for the angsty middle, because it was just great! I think I was as worried about Ginny’s shoes as Tonks was, and I’m so glad you put that detail in there. And the conversation about Arthur and Molly and coupons, oh lord, hilarious.

wildmagelet December 28 2006, 03:44:40 UTC

I just realised that I used the word "nervous" twice in that one sentence. And that I really need a Remus/Tonks beta-reader. :) Thanks, Jordan! I had second thoughts about the plot of this, because it seemed so angsty that I was worried about it verging into Days of Our Lives territory, so I'm really glad if it read okay to you. Even if it did provoke a moment of hate, hee.

Thank you so much for the comments! I'm looking forward to working my way down the list of fics tonight, myself.

scarlett71177 December 26 2006, 06:05:28 UTC

I'm not sure if I'd enjoy seeing the fruits of Tonks' knitting more, or Remus'.

Sweet fic. I love that Remus was sitting there waiting for her to awaken, and I loved that he was jealous of Charlie. Mmmm.......

And the coupons- lol, awesome. I think you could write a whole series of one-shots based upon those and you wouldn't get any complaints!

Well done,

Amy

wildmagelet December 28 2006, 03:46:33 UTC

I think Remus's knitting, myself. With that Marauder sense of humour, goodness knows what inappropriate gift he would take a stab at! :)

I couldn't resist throwing in a teeny dab of jealousy. I'm happy if a fic is nothing but jealous!Remus. I have evil tastes in fiction.

Thank you so much, Amy! I'm going to start reading my way down the list of fics tonight, and I'm looking forward to both of yours.

scarlett71177 December 30 2006, 03:46:16 UTC

lol, Inappropriate *snickers* Oh my mind is totally in the gutter now.

Jealous Remus is quite hot, I must admit. ;-)

majorcarter_sg1 December 26 2006, 07:00:15 UTC

that was great. i like how it started out kinda sadish then turn horrable and finally left us all smileing. And Tonk's love speech was perfect. good work.
- Sam

wildmagelet December 28 2006, 03:47:51 UTC

I didn't want to end it on a really sad note, since it was supposed to be a Christmas fic, so I'm glad if it left you smiling! And if the speech came across okay, because that was the part I was most worried about. Thank you so much for the nice comment!