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Dec 23, 2006 16:11

Title: The Muggle Manner (Prolouge)
Author:freakinwinky
Word Count:1,980
prompts:Christmas Fair, popcorn
Sumarry: 'The man seemed intent on being increadibly difficult to shop for...'
Author's Note: The writing portion of my brain seems to have gone a tad bit haywire. I come up with long and complicated story plots and seem to have no time in which to write ( Read more... )

freakinwinky, romantic comedy, christmas moon fic advent

Comments 15

anonymous December 23 2006, 23:20:35 UTC

Very nice. =) I'm looking forward to the next part.

freakinwinky December 23 2006, 23:43:53 UTC

Thank you! It's on its way, I promise!

devonwood December 24 2006, 03:01:22 UTC

Very nice prologue, although it stands nicely on its own. I love the idea of Muggle popcorn as a gift for Remus. If you continue to write the rest of this, I can't wait to see his reaction to her gift. :)

devonwood December 26 2006, 21:07:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you think it could stand on its own if it had to (Which it won't, I promise). Hope you like the next bit as well. Thanks for reading!

kileaiya December 26 2006, 02:09:24 UTC

Oh what a cute idea! I love Tonks ignoring her mother in lieu of thinking on Remus’ present. Very sweet prologue!

I look forward to the next bit!

kileaiya December 26 2006, 21:09:51 UTC

Thanks! The issue of how to portray Andromeda (and particularly Tonks' reaction to her mother) was a difficult one to come up with simply because its been done in Fanfic so often and in so many different ways. I'm glad you think this worked! I hope you'll enjoy the next part which should be here in a day or two. Thanks for reading!

ch_arrie December 26 2006, 13:21:56 UTC

The format of interspersing Tonks' thoughts with her mother's conversation is really intriguing. It's a very nice contrast to the normal straightforward narative line. I do hope you are able to finish the piece. It's a very good start and leaves the reader wanting to see Remus' reaction.
Merry Christmas!
Constance

ch_arrie December 26 2006, 21:12:38 UTC

I have to admit I patted myself on the back a bit for using that, though as I said earlier, it took a while to come up with it. I like experimenting with different styles and orriginal ways of writing things when I can, so I'm glad you thought this worked. The next part will be up shortly I promise. Thanks for reading!