Comments | metamorfic_moon: Christmas Falls (or was that balls?)

redonthefly in metamorfic_moon

Christmas Falls (or was that balls?)

Dec 23, 2006 13:15

“Be more careful, Tonks. Watch your step, Tonks. Look out for that bloody stoop, Tonks!” Nymphadora Tonks growled to herself as she hobbled along the damp cobblestone street that lead to her flat. The day was suitably cold and wet; it fit her mood nicely. Irritably, she smacked a stray aluminum can that lay in the gutter and grunted in ( Read more... )

redonthefly, christmas moon fic advent, humour

Comments 14

molly_coddles December 27 2006, 14:03:53 UTC

Excellent use of prompts!
Great fic, I love that she nailed the socks to her mantle. Makes me wonder if she'll have them stuffed and mounted like a hunter with a good story about the deer head on his wall. ;)
Fun fic, I really enjoyed it!

redonthefly December 28 2006, 01:44:02 UTC

Thanks so much!

lady_bracknell December 29 2006, 02:51:30 UTC

I laughed out loud at the thought of Tonks getting her revenge on the socks....

I thought this was a lot of fun. I really liked Tonks' annoyance in the early section, and how that seems to dissipate the instant she sees Remus, and I loved all the little details about the Chudley Canons colours and what she'd been doing to break her leg in the first place.

All very nicely done.

Don't mind me anonymous May 3 2008, 11:52:12 UTC

I loved the story, how touching and sentimental, with a bit of humor... Oh yeah, you spelled Kingsley wrong, but I don't think anyone cares, the story's much too good.