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godricgal in metamorfic_moon

Good Things Come...

Dec 20, 2006 00:33

Title: Good Things Come...
Author: godricgal
Word count: 10,076
Rating:: PG
Warnings: none
Summary: Tonks has been looking forward to the Order Christmas party for weeks, hoping that it will be her chance to sort out her relationship with Remus once and for all. An unexpected and futile assignment gets in the way of that, but sometimes, bad things happen ( Read more... )

romance, christmas moon fic advent, godricgal

Comments 35

vivnow December 20 2006, 01:49:39 UTC

This is very good!

How've you been?

godricgal December 20 2006, 05:13:02 UTC

Thank you, Viv!

I'm okay, thank you. You have a lovely Christmas, hugs to you and Joey!

gijane7702 December 20 2006, 02:28:32 UTC

Oh, it was loverly!!

I like that he planned their first date out so well =) Just to get her all to hisself (is that even a word?)

Great job!! Happy Christmas =)

godricgal December 20 2006, 05:14:46 UTC

Thank you!

Merry Christmas to you, too.

gijane7702 December 20 2006, 06:48:43 UTC

You're up late...or early =)

It's to early/late for me. I'm off to bed (148am...ugh)

devonwood December 20 2006, 05:15:01 UTC

Your characterization is exceedingly spot-on and absolutely adorable. :) I love how both of them were dissapointed at the disruption of the party, although I have a sneaky feeling that both Remus and Tonks enjoyed this outcome better.

And I loved the fact that the Christmas Carol didn't rhyme. That made my day, and it was so cute. Such a Ted Tonksy thing to do. :D

godricgal December 20 2006, 18:22:49 UTC

Thank you very much! I think your sneaky feeling might be spot on. ;)

Thanks for commenting on the awkward line of the Christmas song, I'm pleased to hear that worked for you. Try singing it...it's not easy. ;)

Merry Christmas!

scarlett71177 December 20 2006, 07:15:08 UTC

*sigh* How lovely!

Your characterizations were wonderful, as was your prose and narration.

I think you've captured the precise moments of falling in love with someone spectacularly well!

Merry Christmas!

Amy

godricgal December 20 2006, 18:18:58 UTC

Thanks, Amy! Very pleased to hear you enjoyed the fic.

Merry Christmas!

sugarannie December 20 2006, 07:16:43 UTC

The story is really cool, but what really made me laugh was the song! Great idea how you made it a wizarding one.
:D

godricgal December 20 2006, 18:15:32 UTC

Thank you very much! Good to know the song gave you a laugh.

Merry Christmas!