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Dec 03, 2006 13:01

Title:Out in the street
Author: SugarAnnie
Format: Drabble
Rating & Warnings: PG13, I think(slight allusion to sexual issues)
Prompts: Christmas Crackers
Word Count: 330
Summary: Maybe it had not been the best idea, after all, to go and do the Christmas shopping only one week before it was Christmas...
Author’s Notes: Sorry this is so short. I ( Read more... )

romance, christmas moon fic advent, sugarannie

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author_by_night December 3 2006, 12:14:14 UTC
:) I like. I wish I could think of something more intelligent, but alas, it's quite early in the morning.

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sugarannie December 3 2006, 13:34:35 UTC
Thanks for the positive comment :)
I was glad to receive it despite the shortness of the statement.

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mrstater December 3 2006, 13:38:26 UTC
Aw, what a cute little drabble! I like drabbles that capture little seemingly insignificant moments in time and make more of them, because that's the stuff that makes relationships work. Especially like the last line.

Had a little trouble reading because of the formatting. Could you tweak your post so there's a new paragraph for each line of dialogue, and do paragraph format as you see here, with a return between each?

Good first submission, and good luck with your second prompt!

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sugarannie December 3 2006, 13:43:20 UTC
Edited it a bit (and also added the missing tags). Hopefully, it's easier to read now.
And I'm glad you liked it.

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fantasticjackie December 3 2006, 15:07:16 UTC
Yay! Very cute. :) I love Remus' line. =D

Interesting incorporation of the secrecy issue. I've never really thought about how much muggles who know wizards are allowed to find out. On the one hand, there's Petunia who didn't want anything to do with Lilly and thus had no desire to learn anything. On the other, Hermione's parents actually went shopping with her in the second book.

It certainly leads me to wonder... Thanks for the thought! :)

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sugarannie December 3 2006, 20:49:06 UTC
Thanks for liking it!
Also, I have also always wondered about how far families are allowed in...it is kind of interesting.

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majorcarter_sg1 December 3 2006, 18:48:39 UTC
That was cute. Nice couple interaction and I love the look into Tonks childhood.
-Sam

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sugarannie December 3 2006, 20:49:25 UTC
Thanks :)

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molly_coddles December 3 2006, 20:56:34 UTC
Aww, dating shopping is so sweet!
I love how Ted Tonks never told his mum that there were wizarding crackers, whether because of the statute or simply to keep his mother feeling involved. Such a fun image of a grandma sharing a bit of Muggle magic with her granddaughter.
Lovely!

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sugarannie December 8 2006, 09:14:55 UTC
Thanks :)

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