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In Truths That She Learned, or, Remus’ Birthday

Dec 26, 2010 21:17

Title: In Truths That She Learned, or, Remus’ Birthday
Author: bway_love (jazzylittlemonster on ff.net)
Rating: PG/K+
Warnings: No! A bit fluffy, maybe.
Prompt: "To the voices no one hears,
We have come to find you.
With your laughter and your tears
Goodness, hope, and virtue
- God Bless Us Everyone"
Word Count: 2, 386
Summary: Remus Lupin requests ( Read more... )

romance, bway_love, angst, winter hallows advent

Comments 17

severely_lupine December 27 2010, 10:01:17 UTC

Oh, that's so sweet. Rather sad, but very sweet. It is always better to look on the bright side, isn't it? I especially like that little tag with Snape, whose birthday party even fewer people would likely show up to.

bway_love December 28 2010, 01:43:30 UTC

Yes, the quote spoke to me of the bright side, and of the people who often get looked over having a chance to be celebrated. Glad that came across! And the Snape part was one of my favourite bits, glad you liked it too. Thank you very much for the nice review!

the_conspiracie December 28 2010, 23:07:31 UTC

"And as Tonks studies him, wiping her eyes clumsily with the back of her hand, she sees that he really, truly is happy."

I LOVE THAT. heh. It's so perfect, all of it, so very in-character for both of them. I love the two paragraphs where you present the opposing viewpoints (and the note that Sirius has no choice but to be at the party, so Tonks is the only one who put in extra effort to show up) and the premise in general. The end with Snape is cute too.

bway_love December 29 2010, 01:20:48 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I loved hearing about the parts you liked, thank you very much for your review! :)

more_ruthless January 13 2011, 02:40:34 UTC

Sigh....Yummy Dressed Up Remus overjoyed because his two best friends are with him for his birthday. Especially liked the ending with Snape. Says a lot about Tonks.

Thanks for sharing!

bway_love January 13 2011, 05:05:18 UTC

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed. :) And yes I'm fond of Snape/Tonks interaction, especially when she tries to understand him. She's an excellent Hufflepuff!

mollywheezy January 16 2011, 19:32:51 UTC

Loved it! (And not just because my birthday is also in March, and I will be 37, lol.) I think Remus got what he really wanted for his birthday--snogging with Tonks. ;) Great ending, too! It's just like Tonks to even be kind to Snape.

bway_love January 18 2011, 06:35:31 UTC

So glad you enjoyed! I think Remus did ;) And yes, Tonks is a good'un :) And happy birthday for March!!