just under the wire...

Oct 25, 2006 19:14

...but I made it!

Title: And Then An Animagus Walked In the Room...
Author: eclecticmum
Rating & Warnings: K+
Prompts: Thing - Niffler, Place - Hogwarts Front Gates, Time - A Day of Storms, Genre - Romantic Comedy
Word Count: 1498
Summary: Because only Sirius could have imagined a plan quite this completely insane.
Author’s Notes: Written for the second ( Read more... )

half moon rising fic jumble, romantic comedy, eclecticmum

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mrstater October 26 2006, 17:02:41 UTC
What an excellent start this is. Really clever to begin with Remus, in the rain, getting the niffler, and then to take us back in time. Lots of snappy dialogue and great characterization in this. I'm really eager to read what Sirius gets them up to! Do continue and post at your journal, and contact us with the link!

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mrstater October 26 2006, 18:38:05 UTC
And I forgot to say that my favorite thing was Tonks morphing her skin. Oddly, I was thinking about that yesterday, if she ever does odd things to her skin.

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molly_coddles October 26 2006, 18:23:41 UTC
Fun! This is excellent, and of course I want "The Rest of the Story," as Paul Harvey would say.
Love how you've used your prompts and set things up. Great job!

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kerrymdb October 28 2006, 22:40:59 UTC
Very nice. I liked the formatting of the piece. I have to admit, that I'm quite curious to see what Sirius is up to.

Good job! :)

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jncar October 30 2006, 23:28:42 UTC
Finally reviewing!

I really liked the use of the flashback, but the transition into it would have been clearer if you included something like "One day earlier..." or something to that effect.

The banter was fun, and I REALLY want to know what Sirius came up with. =)

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phe_o November 2 2006, 01:40:25 UTC
Oh, you've got us all hooked now. We MUST find out what Sirius has planned! I don't think I can sleep without knowing. ;)

I love the Tonks trying to sound like Remus moment, and Remus blushing. Such a sweet, warm-and-fuzzy moment.

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