Fic: Charming the Test

[roh_wyn]

Title: Charming the Test
Author: roh_wyn
Rating & Warnings: PG13
Prompts: scar; Decoy Detonator
Word Count: 963
Summary: Tonks tries to charm a Muggle object, much to Remus's consternation.
Author’s Notes: I had big plans for this event, but my first three story ideas did not really pan out. I'm not sure this one did either, but I have three minutes

Comments

[more_ruthless]

Seamless and yet poignant, given what we know he's going to "lose it" in reaction. thanks for sharing!!

[carnivalgirl]

Aww, I love the ending! I can't imagine what Remus must have thought seeing three positive pregnancy tests. It's great to see this scenario presented in a fairly positive light when normally it's so angsty. I also enjoyed Tonks's positive attitude towards Weasley goods, and the adjective 'Tonksian' - I can imagine Remus using that, in a fond mockery kind of way.

I kind of want to see what happens when the hair colour spell shows multiple colours. "Weird. I really thought we had it right this time!"

[shimotsuki]

I really like this characterization of Tonks, always poking at things and trying to see how they work.

Some really fun lines, too, like:

"But how?" He backtracked hastily, catching the look on her face. "I mean, I know how."

I liked the his kitchen/their kitchen line as well, for the way it shows that they're still adjusting to being married.