Only What You Need (1/4)

Sep 01, 2010 23:21

Title: Only What You Need (1/4)
Author: chococoffeekiss
Rating & Warnings: PG for drinking, language, innuendo and abuse of prescription medication.
Prompt: Angst/Humour and Dragon (sort-of, I tried!)
Format & Word Count: chaptered fic, 1201/approx. 4000
Summary: After the loss of a friend, the Order's two token shapeshifting freaks find comfort in the bottom of ( Read more... )

chococoffeekiss, angst, summer hallows jumble, humour

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solochan September 2 2010, 06:54:39 UTC
Wow, I really liked this, the feel of it was so different to what I was expecting, I love how Tonks shouts at the guitar player, and how she snaps at Remus for playing with the bar-mat.

And Tonks is so bad-ass <3 I love it.

You give them such chemistry and personality with ease that everything just seems to flow! I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapter

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chococoffeekiss September 3 2010, 16:49:17 UTC
Thanks girly!!! I need to get on the ball with reviews, lol.

Hopefully I can get all the chapters up before deadline, I keep finding things that are wrong with it, but your review really made me feel better about this. :)

*hugs you*

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drumher September 3 2010, 00:35:59 UTC
I love where this is going and how, even in the angst-genre, your penchant for humor comes through. Looking forward to 2/4.

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shimotsuki September 11 2010, 02:16:30 UTC
What a great start. I like the way they're so aware of each other, especially the way each of them is so affected by the other's grief. It's a really moving and effective way to show how much Remus hurts by making it be the first time Tonks sees him not being unflappable.

And Remus snapping those guitar strings is such an excellent image!

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