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War Baby, by MrsTater

Aug 31, 2010 21:25

Title: War Baby
Author: mrstater
Rating & Warnings: G, none
Prompt: angst, grave
Format & Word Count: fic, 1743 words
Summary: It's time for Teddy's first outing, and for Tonks to make peace with a noble great idiot.
Author’s Notes: Unbetaed and I'm not at all sure I've said what I wanted to say with this piece, but the Tater Tot doesn't leave me with ( Read more... )

mrstater, angst, summer hallows jumble

Comments 10

sspring92 September 1 2010, 03:07:45 UTC

::sob:: That was indeed angsty! But since I subscribe to the AU universe, not as sad as it could be knowing the future!

I love Tonks wanting to talk to her father by herself at first, and then asking Remus to join her.

and makes Remus wonder how much greater wound her suffering be had he died while on the run--during his assignment among the werewolves, or if Harry allowed him to accompany him on his mission--thank Merlin he didn't, that Remus had returned home, had the chance to be the father to the precious boy with whom Dora now kneels before the grave. So glad Remus finally realized that running off, actually made things worse and not better, it takes awhile, but he finally catches on!
Thanks for posting, and have a great trip!

jobey_in_error September 1 2010, 13:41:08 UTC

Oh, I think what you were trying to say through came in loud and clear... that or something else that was pretty damn good ( ... )

jobey_in_error September 1 2010, 13:42:33 UTC

Oh, all right, I lied a little. Just wanted to mention that sneakily working in the word "million" only adds to this fic's whole quality of being a crown on all of L/T-ness.

solochan September 2 2010, 06:42:38 UTC

Where to I begin? The image of them dressing Teddy in itself is a piece of art work and the timing is lovely. It would of been complete with just dressing Little Lupin, but nope, you took it that bold extra step and showed Tonks in a light we don't see her in very often.

I'm not going to lie, I was trying not to cry, It's really lovely piece and like all of your work makes me grin ear to ear.

It's fic lets like this that remind me why I still love this pairing after the series being over so long. Thank you very much!

gilpin25 September 7 2010, 20:26:27 UTC

Oh, this was a wonderful read ( ... )