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Ever So

Oct 25, 2006 08:26

Title: Ever So by rosedemonChallenge Prompts: Judgement Day, cinema, angst and "I know Lupin tried to talk her round, but she's still really down ( Read more... )

half moon rising fic jumble, angst, rosedemon

Comments 16

kerrymdb October 31 2006, 05:51:10 UTC

This was sweet. I like the idea that Tonks at first thought that Remus couldn't have just wanted to ask her out and was coersed to do it.

And then the ending, with theit exchange before going inside was lovely.

Nice job! :)

rosedemon November 2 2006, 05:36:13 UTC

Thanks so much. :D

phe_o November 1 2006, 02:49:28 UTC

What a sweet little ending! Love moments like those. But what I really enjoyed were how well they meshed together--walking as one, communicating without speaking, etc. Very well done. :)

rosedemon November 2 2006, 05:37:22 UTC

Thanks. I may re-write this a bit. I had some issues here and there, but I am happy that you enjoyed it.

kileaiya November 9 2006, 06:56:34 UTC

What a sweet story! And I really enjoyed the ending, it was just great. :)