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[pleutaitgouttes]

Title:  Breathing Heavy and Getting Nowhere
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[phe_o]

I think you did a good job with a difficult set of prompts. Tonks seems a little bit more dramatic than I have pictured her but I do like the way that she calls Remus on his fear. You've got some great lines within as well, with very descriptive diction. :)

[kileaiya]

The list at the beginning was my favourite part, it set a nice tone. It was a little hard to follow at times, but over all I quite liked it.