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Sorting Out by Starsea

Dec 21, 2009 21:11

Title: Sorting Out
Author: Starsea (sea_thoughts)
Rating & Warnings: G
Prompts: Ice Skates
Format & Word Count: Drabble (499 words)
Summary: While going through some boxes, Remus discovers something he didn't know about his wife.
Author’s Notes: My first fic with married Remus&Tonks! Yay!

( One winter morning )

sea_thoughts, christmas cracker advent, drabble

Comments 23

the_conspiracie December 21 2009, 23:00:15 UTC

aww, I love this! A very cute insight into what is obviously a difficult time for them. Although now I'm curious as to what the little design on the skate is. ^^

sea_thoughts December 22 2009, 11:54:25 UTC

It's the silhouette of a young girl. :) Ted got them as a reference to her first name, before Tonks started hating it.

Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed it!

carnivalgirl December 21 2009, 23:11:40 UTC

Aw, what a lovely take on your prompt! My automatic thought would always be that Tonks + skates equals disaster, but it is very sweet and touching that it was a bonding point between her and her dad. You put a lot of meaning into very few words, and that's excellent. I loved the last line too, another turnaround! :)

sea_thoughts December 22 2009, 11:56:02 UTC

Thank you!

My automatic thought would always be that Tonks + skates equals disaster, but it is very sweet and touching that it was a bonding point between her and her dad.

That was mine, too, but I thought it would be more interesting if she'd actually been quite good.

You put a lot of meaning into very few words, and that's excellent.

Thanks, I had to edit this down a bit to get it into the drabble catergory so I'm happy that it is still moving and feels put together.

I loved the last line too, another turnaround! :)

That's one of my favourites as well!

hmrpotter December 22 2009, 00:39:20 UTC

Very simple, and nicely done. :)

sea_thoughts December 22 2009, 11:56:12 UTC

Thank you!

sspring92 December 22 2009, 05:23:26 UTC

AWW, thanks for posting! I love the thought of Tonks actually being able to skate! In the AU world, she really can teach him how to skate next winter!

sea_thoughts December 22 2009, 12:03:03 UTC

I love the thought of Tonks actually being able to skate!

Me, too. I love the idea of her teaching him to skate even more, though! ;)

oneandonlysusan December 23 2009, 05:00:24 UTC

Cuteness! Thanks for sharing!