You're a fantastic writer of action and adventure; I truly feel tense and eager for Part Two! This villain you've created is quite astounding, unlike anything I have ever read, and I look forward to seeing how Tonks faces up to him. She's clearly very strong. Apart from that I also enjoyed the sweet moments in this fic; I've been to Butlins many many times so the references were very accurate and entertaining, and I loved their dialogue, especially the joke about baby Cornettos!
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Apart from that I also enjoyed the sweet moments in this fic; I've been to Butlins many many times so the references were very accurate and entertaining, and I loved their dialogue, especially the joke about baby Cornettos!
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