Evenings in Trees

[native_spirit]

Title:  Evenings in Trees
Author: native_spirit
Rating & Warnings: PG13
Prompts: Light evenings
The last girl and the last reason to make this last for as long as I could
First kiss and the first time that I felt connected to anything
The weight of water, the way you told me to look past everything I had ever learned
The final word in the final sentence you ever

Comments

[shimotsuki]

I really like the image of the warm colors in the sunset, and Tonks trying one out for her hair. Remus is very sweet, looking out for Tonks's safety and (pretending to be?) scandalized by her peeking in the boys' windows.

And I like the way you've ended this! Even though watching the sunset was the original plan, they've found a good reason to be distracted. ;)

[native_spirit]

thank you! cheers for commenting, im glad you enjoyed it ;P

[sea_thoughts]

Awww! Beautiful. I love the treetop setting, very unusual, and the feeling of something entirely new and strange for Remus as he kisses her. Bless!

[native_spirit]

thank you! im not really sure where the tree came from, but it worked out well XD

[secondmezzanine]

Oh, this was just lovely. The premise was really fun, and I love the banter between them, Lupin's quietness, her youthfulness, and the last line:

The light in their leafy hollow darkened, and they missed the sunset.

Oh, that last line.

&hearts

[native_spirit]

thanks! i wasnt sure how to end it, so im glad you liked that line ;P and i love your icon, btw!

[secondmezzanine]

Definitely did! And thanks, I'm rather attached to my Lupin icon. :)

[katyhasclogs]

I love how visual this is - I had such a clear image in my head of them both clambering up the tree.

The last line is fab too. :)

[native_spirit]

thank you! i was picturing it as i wrote it ;P glad you enjoyed!

[tegdoh]

I really liked your use of color in this, it seems very Tonks. A lovely look at the early part of their relationship.

[native_spirit]

cheers! im glad you liked it :D