Kryptonite, or A Much Better Ending

[chococoffeekiss]

Title: Kryptonite, or A Much Better Ending
Author: chococoffeekiss
Ratings: PG, for language and implied!sex.
Warnings: I seem stuck in Grimmauld Place, so I just ran with it. Watch out for random comic book references, I don't own anything you recognize.
Word Count: 2,508
Summary: "Once upon a time, in a land across the sea, there was a girl with a ridiculous

Comments

[emmacmf]

Completely and totally made of awesomesauce.

[chococoffeekiss]

Awww! I'm so glad you liked it!
LOLS. Awesomesauce is my favourite kind of sauce:D

[mrstater]

You've done yet more brilliant things with this prompt! I'm a superhero nut, too, so I loved this. Especially Tonks' assessment of Superman, lol. I much prefer X-Men.

It never ceases to amaze me how you can write these hilarious fics, and yet weave in so many poignant lines that just nail the characters, like this: He didn’t want to hide anything, but was forced to walk in the shadow of a monster he didn’t want to be, and the more he tried to overcome it, the more others wanted to judge him.

Love all the twists and turns you did with the Little Red story, too. Tonks' edits are so her, and what a perfect ending for her to skip out the door, lol.

So glad you got this prompt!!

ETA: Also, that description about Remus' voice being like a coffee shop that made Tonks want coffee? Brilliant description!

[chococoffeekiss]

I love superheroes too, so I'm really glad I got that prompt! I figured you would like the hero aspect of all of it:D
This was actually the most difficult of mine to write, there were so many other superhero/fairy tale references that I wanted to work in, and couldn't find a space for them(I really wanted to throw in a "Holey mountain of iron, Batman!" but I refrained. LOL). As always, thanks so much for your review, it's really made my day:D

Thanks for your review, dear!

[gppr]

Very clever and indeed, awesome. Loved the references and the flashbacks too.

[chococoffeekiss]

Aww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it:D

[moon_reader]

Brilliance! You've more than succeeded with the humour.

My favorite lines:

...being embarrassingly fluffy.

I couldn't stop laughing at that.

...then we can turn him into a gourd together. Oh, come on! It’ll be fun! All the cool kids are doing it.

Now that's a good idea for a fic - Tonks and Remus turning Sirius into a pumpkin!

“Superman? The guy who wears his underwear outside his trousers?”

I've never heard it put in... quite that way before. XD

I'm leaving out carrots for the Killer Plot Bunny of Caerbannog. ;)

[chococoffeekiss]

Oh, your fave lines!!! The ones you picked are my favorites too!
Tonks' Superman observations is by far my favorite line ever! It's so true!

I'm leaving out carrots for the Killer Plot Bunny of Caerbannog. ;)

Ah, thanks for feeding my muse. :D

[moon_reader]

No problem :D I'm just bribing it not to attack me until the end of the semester!

[chococoffeekiss]

LOL! Good plan!

[carnivalgirl]

This was excellent in so many ways! I loved everything about it. The mixture of fairy tales and comics was really well done and it was very romantic, especially the kiss under the Kryptonite. And for some reason the idea of them turning Sirius into a gourd and "All the cool kids are doing it" made me laugh out loud. Really amazing stuff!

[chococoffeekiss]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And I think Sirius would make a nice pumpkin, don't you? ;) Thanks so much for reading! :D