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Angels (and their Guardians)

Dec 23, 2008 16:28

Title: Angels (and their Guardians)
Author: carnivalgirl
Ratings & Warnings: G, alternative universe.
Word Count: 4,878
Prompts: Christmas dinner (with a turkey or a goose); "He isn't old, nor anything bad, but good and kind, and the best friend I've got - next to you. Pray don't fly into a passion; I want to be kind, but I know I shall get angry if you abuse ( Read more... )

general, the pink christmas advent, carnivalgirl, alternate universe

Comments 25

kt_tonguetied December 23 2008, 16:35:00 UTC

oh wow. The ending did come out a lot nicer this way, and I liked the changes you made very much :D

and, it must be done.

*first comment dance*

woohoo!

carnivalgirl December 23 2008, 16:36:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it, I was hoping you wouldn't be all "Aw, it was cuter when she did it...". I feel very 'woo hoo!' too as this has taken forever to write and post! Still, it's a labour of love.
Thank you for commenting!!

wotcher_maera December 23 2008, 20:02:10 UTC

Aww I love it! Especially the ending. Nice concept! :)

carnivalgirl December 23 2008, 21:04:12 UTC

Thank you! I hoped people would like the ending, it was a lot of fun to write!

merryb87 December 24 2008, 03:00:14 UTC

I just love this fic, and the idea of Tonks and Remus having to deal with what comes with having a squib child. I really love the dynamic between Teddy and Olivia, I get the impression that they spend a lot of nights just whispering and plotting!

I really do hope you write more along this storyline! It has so much potential. And I'm also really glad that I could help you with this, it was my joy! :D

carnivalgirl December 24 2008, 15:02:59 UTC

Thank you! I hoped people would like the way Remus and Tonks dealt with her being a Squib, because I think even if it was difficult they'd be very good at it. I really enjoyed writing Olivia and Teddy-I like the idea of them 'plotting', they are second generation Marauders, after all.
I imagine I will return to this storyline at some point in the future, as it has been really fun to write. And thank you again for helping, I'm happy you enjoyed the fic!

sspring92 December 24 2008, 05:00:41 UTC

Very original concept! Poor Remus and Tonks though, they are always having to deal with some kind of prejudice! I do love that Teddy and Olivia really seem to love and like each other, no sibling jealously or rivalry!

carnivalgirl December 24 2008, 14:54:16 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I felt a bit bad for making them suffer, but I think Olivia's fortunate to have parents who know what they're up against! As for Ted and Olivia, I liked having them be sweet to each other, but I imagine they have their moments of rivalry-put some chocolate between them, for instance....Thank you for commenting!

gppr December 25 2008, 03:32:09 UTC

Aw, that was fun and sweet. I loved Remus, Tonks, Teddy and Livvy, they are a precious little family. Remus and Tonks are superb parents. Very nice story.

carnivalgirl December 26 2008, 15:10:18 UTC

Thank you very much! I was hoping people would like this AU family. I really think Remus and Tonks would have made great parents, so it makes me happy to know they seemed that way. Thank you again for commenting!