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God Rest Ye Merry Hypocrites

Dec 20, 2008 15:22

Title: God Rest Ye Merry Hypocrites
Author: chococoffeekiss
Rating: T or PG-13 for innuendo, snogging, and language.
Warning, this product may contain traces of: Mental instability, first-person point-of-view, poor attempts at the validation of affection from others, Fight Club references and general lunacy. Oh, and Christmas.
Prompts: "You are not exactly ( Read more... )

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Comments 43

jobey_in_error December 22 2008, 14:43:16 UTC

Wow, *extremely* awesome! Cute, funny, sweet, and sexy -- no better combo. I was particularly fond of both mentions of staring at the ceiling of feigning innocence. There is not a *single* sentence I don't like, and most of them I grinned and got really squealy over. Thanks very :-)

chococoffeekiss January 1 2009, 19:00:33 UTC

Thank you very much! Your review totally made my day!

mrstater December 22 2008, 22:11:45 UTC

Your Remus is so deliciously neurotic. His running internal monologue is just the perfect mix of self-deprecating humor and angst for him (loved him going all "one, he's sitting in my chair, two he's wearing my clothes, three, his name's Remus Lupin" in thinking about Tonks, lol), and oh, I laughed so hard at this bit: This is where I would usually put both hands over my ears and start singing the chorus of “God Rest Ye Merry Hippogriffs” at top volume, but cannot, being trapped as it were between the proverbial rock and hard place. The rock being, oddly enough, a warm and girlish body……And the hard place? Through the humorous lens, you're really able to capture his inner conflict -- particularly in his can't vs. won't, which I think is what it always comes down to with Remus.

I figured Tonks was probably awake, just like we know Remus probably wasn't really sleeping on the Hogwarts Express in POA. Yet another way these two are just perfect for each other....It'll be of great consternation to their children one day.

chococoffeekiss January 1 2009, 19:14:08 UTC

I'm very happy that you liked it:D I've always pictured Remus as one of those unintentionally funny guys, just because of how clever he seems in the books. If he didn't have a sense of humour, he wouldn't like Tonks at all! And she can prank with the best of them--another reason they should be together!

Thank you for your review:D

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chococoffeekiss January 1 2009, 19:15:12 UTC

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it!:D

godricgal December 23 2008, 12:46:06 UTC

I love just how much Remus can think to think from Tonks falling asleep on his shoulder. He's absolutely adorable in his predicament, though I'm awfully glad he came to the right decision in the end. It was very romantic, as even Remus couldn't deny in the end and I absolutely loved reading it. :)

chococoffeekiss January 1 2009, 19:17:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:D

ravenna_t December 23 2008, 18:57:28 UTC

Oh! I love everything about this fic :)

Especially,

"Am I what, pathetic or available? Because I’m both.

I’m pathetically available.

I’m availably pathetic."

You had me laughing out loud!

chococoffeekiss January 1 2009, 19:18:17 UTC

Oh, good! I love to make people laugh out loud! Thank you so much for your review!