God Rest Ye Merry Hypocrites

[chococoffeekiss]

Title: God Rest Ye Merry Hypocrites
Author: chococoffeekiss
Rating: T or PG-13 for innuendo, snogging, and language.
Warning, this product may contain traces of: Mental instability, first-person point-of-view, poor attempts at the validation of affection from others, Fight Club references and general lunacy. Oh, and Christmas.
Prompts: "You are not exactly

Comments

[train_lindz]

Oh, I absolutely love this. The internal monologue, the Fight Club throw backs, the fact that she was awake the whole time of his internal dilemmas - fantastic!!!

Great job!

[chococoffeekiss]

LOL! So glad you liked it!
I've been wanting to do a stream-of-consciousness fic from Remus' point of view for forever now..
There's just something about torturing a respectable man that's just so fun:D

[kt_tonguetied]

A warm, sticky, awkward, chocolately, so-innocent-I-think-I-might-have-just-died kind of kiss. An I-almost-passed-out-because-I-forgot-to-breathe kind of kiss.

...I should just quit writing...*shakes head*

[chococoffeekiss]

Please don't quit! I love your writing!

[kt_tonguetied]

lolz I was just complaining because yours was so much better than mine :P

[chococoffeekiss]

That's not true! I adored your fic! It was sweet and beautiful, and so, so cute.
(that scene with Remus done up as Santa? Come on, that was the cutest thing ever.)

...whilst I can only write things that are sort-of funny.

[rahnee13]

This was so cute! I loved the self-deprecating nature of Remus' monologue, and how sly it turns out Tonks was.

[chococoffeekiss]

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[hmrpotter]

Love it!!

[chococoffeekiss]

:D Thanks!! Glad you liked it!

[sspring92]

The rock being, oddly enough, a warm and girlish body…

…And the hard place?

May be one of the all time great R/T fan fic lines. I always love those moments when Remus realizes... "she likes me, she really, really likes me!"

[chococoffeekiss]

LOLS.
That's an old standby in my boyfriend's joke repetoire, and I thought I bit of a tribute was due, since I steal most of my fanfic ideas from the crazy things he says, lol.