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kt_tonguetied in metamorfic_moon

Firsts and Seconds

Dec 07, 2008 22:37

Title: Firsts and Seconds

Prompts: Hats, gloves and scarves; "I'm the 'I-don't-mind-pushing-my-best-friend-into-but-am-scared-stiff-if-I-get-anywhere-near-it' kind." --White Christmas

Rating & Warnings: G; Overall Silliness with a Santa Costume, slight angstiness

Word Count: 3891

Summary: The Lupins’ first Christmas after the war becomes a time of ( Read more... )

romance, the pink christmas advent, kt_tonguetied, alternate universe

Comments 22

an_ardent_rain December 8 2008, 05:24:20 UTC

Oh, that was adorable! And Harry made me laugh. Hee. I suspected from the beginning it was another baby, but I was so happy when Dora actually found out that was it. I thought you handled the actual telling really well; I liked Remus through the whole story, and that bit particularly. Lovely fic!

kt_tonguetied December 8 2008, 11:35:07 UTC

thank you so very much!

...I just realized I haven't been using my custom icon! *EPIC FAIL*

carnivalgirl December 8 2008, 08:38:46 UTC

Oh, that little girl was the cutest! "I love you, Father Christmas!" OMG *wibbles* I hope they have a girl too.

Harry was great in this, I think he was very happy and in character, especially about Tonks's 'problem'. "Wicked innit?" Awww...reading this has made me very happy. Thank you for writing it!

kt_tonguetied December 8 2008, 11:33:40 UTC

You're so nice; your comment made some of my jitters go away! That's a feat not many can manage! :D

katyscarlett76 December 8 2008, 16:15:14 UTC

That was very cute! Remus as Father Christmas is an adorable image! I like my fluff with a dash of angst just like this, I think it's very likely that the announcement of a second pregnancy (especially so soon after the first) would result in Tonks having those fears and I enjoyed how they played out with her meltdown over small clothes. And it's nice to see Harry all happy and having a proper relationship with Remus.

Well done on being the first to post!

kt_tonguetied December 8 2008, 23:53:46 UTC

thanks very very much! >.< I was actually so excited for this advent that I had finished only a few days after I got my prompts, before it was open for posting. I had just put it off out of nerves XD

chococoffeekiss December 9 2008, 02:56:01 UTC

*is crying*

That was bloody adorable!
I love your thoughtful-yet-funny Harry, and your poor, unsuspecting Remus. He's so cute when he's unsuspecting!
Well done! I hope they have a girl, too!!!
“Oh, I’ve always wanted a baby!” she exclaimed as if she’d never seen her own son before. Several little girls cried out that they wanted a baby too. They had apparently spent most of the night fawning over the little 8-month old and giving him kisses.
The adorableness is incredible! You win, ma'am!

kt_tonguetied December 9 2008, 03:03:12 UTC

Oh wow, you're really nice! XD I wouldn't go so far as to say I've won, but it's really nice of YOU to say so! :D

sspring92 December 9 2008, 05:27:24 UTC

Just the Christmas fluffiness I needed! I think however that the Lupins must have missed the Health Ed class that covered contraception!

kt_tonguetied December 9 2008, 11:31:17 UTC

*snort* yeah, I know it was awfully soon after Teddy to have another baby, but it just popped into my head and wouldn't leave no matter how hard I prodded it! So...let's just say there was...a charm malfunction!! >.>