FIC: The Bottom of the Stairs

[chococoffeekiss]

Title: The Bottom of the Stairs
Author:chococoffeekiss
Rating & Warnings: Rated PG-13
Prompts: "You don't know the latest dance/but when it's time to make romance/your kisses let me know you're not a tomboy." -Don’t Ever Change. And: worry
Word Count:1,926
Summary: "No, I have bigger a problem to worry about. A dilemma, even. A predicament, one might say."
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Comments

[tegdoh]

That was LOL fun from beginning to end. I love that Tonks' inner monologue is just as cheeky and smart-arsed as her comments to Remus. And his bemused flirting, and her response. You've really captured those early moments between them well.

[chococoffeekiss]

thank you for your review! glad you enjoyed it!

[drumher]

This has such a wonderful, spontaneous feel, which is perfect for what's going on inside Tonks' head. You've captured them perfectly and I hope you grace us with more in the future.

Excellent first fic!

[chococoffeekiss]

Thanks for your review!
I have a weird feeling that Spontaneity might be Tonks' middle name.
hehehe.
Your icon still cracks me up. I love it.

[fics_by_fumph]

This was just wonderful!! I had a big smile on my face all the way through, and I love Tonks's almost stream of consciousness way of speaking!

Fantastic, and I look forward to more from you in the future!

[chococoffeekiss]

Yay! Smiley people are ace! So happy you like, it means alot to me.

[go_veg]

I loved the witty conversation. Very funny!

[katielovessean]

I was laughing all the way through. I loved your voice for Tonks. It was a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more of your work.