Fic: Desertion

[anoipua]

Title: Desertion
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Comments

[pinkhairedauror]

Ooohhh... *wipes tears* This is very strong, and I love it! Nice work.

[anoipua]

Thanks so much!

[sasher_copy]

Ugh...So very sad and depressing.

But I liked it, nonetheless.

You had me laughing so hard at the 'my kind' thing.

You characterize Tonks very well.

Good job!

[anoipua]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you like the characterization for Tonks. I was very worried that I was making her too much like me.

[mrstater]

Tonks really is the epitome of Hufflepuff, and that unswerving loyalty is exactly why I love her so much as a character. You really captured her inner strength here. Such a sad ending, but great work capturing some of the key moments of their relationship that exemplify just what a strong woman she is!

[anoipua]

Thanks so much!

[shimotsuki]

I really like the parallels you draw between these three snippets of their relationship. Sirius's cameo is great, too; it shows how well he understands and cares about Remus under all the pranking and teasing. The end is sad, of course, but it's satisfying in a way to see them fighting together, back to back. But I think the middle scene is my favorite; I really like Tonks going to great lengths to convince Remus that he isn't as awful as he thinks he is. "Do you have a society now?" Hee!

Also -- it's great to see you posting here again, but I'd say you made a good choice to focus on your thesis for a while. ;) Congratulations on that!

[anoipua]

Thanks so much for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun with that little conversation, and Tonks' angry/hurt banter.

Thanks for the congratulations too. I'm glad to be back to this stuff, way more fun than studying nicotine and memory.

[train_lindz]

It was sad and wonderful all at the same time. Very well done.
I love that you gave Tonks a backbone. She was strong and loyal and just.

And of course I loved Sirius, because really, who doesn't?

[anoipua]

I write very few R/T fics where Sirius doesn't at least get a mention, 'cause, first off, he's a blast to write, and secondly, I think he probably had a huge hand in the Remus/Tonks dynamic in the beginning.

Thanks for you comment! I'm glad you liked it!