Awww that was so cute!!! I loved it! I really liked how you took Andromeda's point of view, seeing them through her eyes worked really well. Plus the idea of my mum finding me in such a circumstances flew into my mind and I could really feel the awkwardness, how embarrassing, poor Tonks! But bless Remus, so cute and I loved how Andromeda could see his love for her plainly on his face :) It was a great set up, Ted obviously knowing something, Andromeda finding the letter and then finding them And then realising they were in love. It was all fab!
Yay! That was so fun and fluffy! It was really hilarious coming from Andromeda's perspective. Sheesh, she is a little nosy, just opening letters and using spare keys to get into apartments, etc. (Remind's me a bit of the mother of my significant other.) How mortifying for Tonks to have her mum walk in on...that. And Remus! I don't know how he had the strenth to go into that kitchen. I really liked Remus in this. I like that he is still so boyish and shy. *sigh*. It was well done and I liked the Andromeda you created and how she had to keep her hands busy doing something, even if it was scrambling eggs for no apparent reason. A wonderful story, thanks for writing it.
This was so good. I don't normally like to read 1st person, but this was really well done- I liked Andromeda's observations about Remus and Tonks and how much they care about each other, despite the awkwardness! A really good use of the prompts too. Thanks for sharing!
This is such nice story. I like your foray into 1st person pov - and Andromeda was an interesting choice. You are able to convey a lot of the dynamics in the Tonks family in this short story.
And Andromeda being the nosy mother was very funny. There she was thinking she was being all clever and sneaky, putting every thing back in place, but then she got an eyeful! :) And Remus was being very brave going into the kitchen alone in this situation - I would probably have jumped out the nearest window and made a run for it. It was perhaps bad judgement to go in without a shirt on, but I certainly enjoyed the image. ;) And I think Tonks may have misjudged her mother's likely reaction slightly - Andromeda makes a spectacular safe on the finish line, being able to open her eyes and see that Remus is A Good Thing for her daughter.
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And Andromeda being the nosy mother was very funny. There she was thinking she was being all clever and sneaky, putting every thing back in place, but then she got an eyeful! :) And Remus was being very brave going into the kitchen alone in this situation - I would probably have jumped out the nearest window and made a run for it. It was perhaps bad judgement to go in without a shirt on, but I certainly enjoyed the image. ;) And I think Tonks may have misjudged her mother's likely reaction slightly - Andromeda makes a spectacular safe on the finish line, being able to open her eyes and see that Remus is A Good Thing for her daughter.
Lovely story - thank you very much for sharing.
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Very nice and gigglesnort-like (with plenty of 'awww' to the side) piece, I quite enjoyed it!
And I enjoyed the use of the prompt :) (and Tonks in my head snorted. "I knew I didn't get my curiosity out of thin air!")
Thanks for sharing!
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