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And Now For Something Completely Different

Oct 31, 2007 16:31

Title: And Now For Something Completely Different
Author: eltea
Rating & Warnings: PG for Pretty Goofy
Prompts: A Day of Gain, Confundus Charm, Horror/Humour, Location #23
Word Count: 2755
Summary: Something is wrong at Grimmauld Place. More wrong than a sudden discovery that one is out of chocolate. So very, very wrong.
Author’s Notes: Credit for the ( Read more... )

horror, eltea, all hallows' moon jumble, humour

Comments 37

fthpfthpfthp November 1 2007, 01:03:13 UTC

HA!

eltea November 4 2007, 23:59:17 UTC

Thanks for reading! =D

bandersnatch42 November 1 2007, 01:34:44 UTC

"Sirius was still there.

Voldemort’s daughter was still gazing melodramatically off into space.

Remus sighed. He was going to have to deal with this like a man.

He got up, muttered a quick “Back in a moment”, ran to the first broom cupboard he came across, and hid."

Lollerskates! Loved it.

eltea November 5 2007, 00:00:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

merryb87 November 1 2007, 03:00:23 UTC

Poor Remus being harassed by a heard of Mary-Sues and characters completely out of character.

You win the internets.

eltea November 5 2007, 00:01:53 UTC

Thanks. =) I spent a while trying to figure out which clichés were most common and coming up with Mary Sues; it was fun. ;)

parapsionic November 1 2007, 05:01:41 UTC

"Isn’t it true that you’re a self-deprecating, manic depressive wreck who can’t function without chocolate?”

LOL. Just about the most accurate description of Noble Prat!Remus I've ever read. :D

I think you've covered just about every R/T cliche there is. Along with scary Mary Sues. All I can say is, thank God for Remus and his Canonus Restorus spell! XD

eltea November 5 2007, 00:05:14 UTC

Thank you. =) It always bothers me that so many people just make him seem pathetic when he must be such a strong character to put up with everything society throws at him - and with all those Mary Sues, too! The sad thing is how easy they were to make up. XD I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. =)

sugarannie November 1 2007, 08:38:24 UTC

You really managed to fit all the major cliches in there that always make me not read a fanfic I find somewhere...and it's just amazing how funny this made your story.
The idea alone is hilarious, but I really like how you worked with it.
:)

eltea November 5 2007, 00:08:06 UTC

Thank you very much. =) I spent a while trying to figure out which characters to include to cover the maximum number of clichés possible, and I still think I might've missed a few. Especially with the Mary Sues; I know I can't have covered all of them. ;) I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. =)