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[metal_goat]

Title: Keep Your Hands Off
Fandom: Fire Emblem 9
Pairing: Shinon/Gatrie
Genre: General, uh... humor, maybe, if you squint and are half asleep
Word Count: 255
Rating: PG-13, because Shinon's snarky little comments aren't very nice
Warnings: Shinon being sort of snarky, possible major OOCness
Summary: He saw they we they looked at each other, the way

Comments

[asidian]

Bwahaha. That was so much love.

This is so snarky and Shinon, it's really fantastic. I laughed aloud at this line: "and if he had stopped looking at her breasts - which were poorly endowed, by the way; you probably couldn’t even call them breasts!" Because the aside was just something I could see him making in his thoughts.

Poor Astrid. I hope you keep this up; I'd like to be able to come back and read it again. :D

[metal_goat]

It was originally going to be less snarky, but Shinon just kept coming in and adding little comments on everything, and it was just too him to delete them. Heh, glad you liked that line, it's one of my personal favorites, too. And I could so just see Shinon just absolutely scruntinizing every little detail about anyone he considered his opponent. :D

[asidian]

Or even the folks he doesn't consider his opponents directly, for that matter. I'm glad it came out snarky; it's so him. :D