No One Worth Fighting (Seigaku, Rikkai)

[meruhen]

Title: No One Worth Fighting
Characters: Seigaku, Rikkai (others teams mentioned)
Rating: PG for now
Word Count: 1029
Summary: There's no one worth fighting anymore. Futuristic!AU
Notes: I told fsop to give me a prompt and she said "Assassins/spies/mafia with Rikkai and Seigaku and common enemies."

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Comments

[fsop]

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I don't know wy you worry so much, you're made to write this kind of stuff.

THIS LINE WAS THE BESTEST: Ghosts would have older technology.

INUI YOU ARE SUCH A FIFTEEN YEAR OLD BOY BENEATH ALL THAT INFORMATION AND LOGIC ;)

It's almost refreshing to have to remember them. <--- I like how that is presented to us with a description of Fuji because then it's so much easier to see him to be the one thinking it ;)

[vacivity]

I wasn't freaked about writing this so much (other than the entire gang wars/mafia/assassins stuff which isn't my strong point) but about my writing in general. Like, paranoid about it and doubting in it all together. :*

The ghosts thing was my favorite. At first I wanted him to mention the slim chances that they don't exist but that line worked so much better.

I need an Inui icon. :x Remind me to upload one later.

[giving_ground]

...!!!!

Dude, I'm just procrastinating about work and wandering LJ at random, but SQUEE. Even if it's mostly Seigaku thus far. Squee. *firm nod*

(By the by, can I send you the Seigaku-centric parts of Dangerous Games at some point? They're kinda made of fail because I don't know how to write Seigaku. They need beating until they are the right shape.)

[vacivity]

Yay! Squeeing is good. :D I'm glad you like.

(Of course! I'd love to read them. Send them whenever you have the chance!)