Cold and Damp (Chapter Four)

[mertlekang]

Title: Cold and Damp
Pairing: Hanchul, Kyumin, Kangteuk
Genre: Zombie!AU
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Violence, swearing
Summary: After Seoul becomes infested with the living dead and the government abandons them; it's only natural that they realise hidden feelings in the midst of disaster.

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Comments

[mertlekang]

Spot for teukiesu

[mertlekang]

Noo, your graphics are lovely ;a;

My mother turned my internet off :I
/using mcdonalds wifi

[teukiesu]

ew mcdonalds DDD:
-pokes kyumin pimp post-

go to it. love it. ship the damn pairing hardcore. kthx /runs

[mertlekang]

Mcdonalds is my greasy heaven ;a;

I'vr written a bit of kyumin in the next chapter
but sungmin is still unconscious so
:I

[teukiesu]

yaaaay kyumin
wait what
..
you mean he fell unconscious because kyu sexed him up
right

[mertlekang]

No, sadly, because he got a concussion and illness from the smoke fumes and the ceiling falling on top of him ;a;

I promise i'll write smut
i just have no idea how to work it into a story ;a;

[teukiesu]

)))):

or you could just write pwp /wiggles eyebrows

even better qmimin HOMG mimin <3333 kyumin <333 together and hnnngh

i just hate qmi /cries

[mertlekang]

>C No
I have no experience in Qmimin/mimin fanfiction ;a;

also; post short kyumin chapter now or post a whole chapter full Hanchul and Kyumin later?

[teukiesu]

post full chapter later. :D

uhmmm qmimin is sort of like where zhou mi and kyu are fawning over super innocent oblivious naive!min and eventually they just are like let's share /sex

ugh i need a beta ))):

[mertlekang]

>BETA BETA BETA BETA<

-and write me a summary - i have no idea how to summarise this stupid story >C

[teukiesu]

which story sfadfasd.

>NOT BETA BETA BETA<

here's what i have so far

A soft melody of a violin was the first thing that Zhou Mi heard when he entered the apartment. It was a sweet, melodic sound and it made him smile a bit. The notes were played with precision and grace, no doubt the player had been practising for the better half of their life. He let his bags drop to the floor with a resounding noise and the playing of the violin abruptly stopped. He felt as if he had lost something as it did. It had been a long time since he heard such sweet notes plucked, but none the less, it came with his job

[mertlekang]

ajkd it's fineee

'
“Oh!” he heard a startled noise and Zhou Mi turned around, his hands on his hips as he turned.'
sounds a bit repetitive with two 'turned's - thats about all i can see wrong with it ~~

Hnn this story obviously ;a;
i have no other stories >C

[teukiesu]

mmm how about spinned.

“Oh!” he heard a startled noise and Zhou Mi turned around, his hands on his hips as he spinned

LOL

spinned around? idk ):

uhmmm

"It had started off as only a few deaths - nobody knew what it could've resulted to. Now Han Geng was on the run, trying only to survive in this world of disaster and..."

k i give up D:

[mertlekang]

That's enough of a prompt, I know what to write now ;U; ~ <3

spinned? SPUN. :I
/kick

uhh
Veered, Circled, Twisted, Rotated ;a;
turned towards the noise, his hands resting on his hips as he looked in the direction of... seeing... blablabla...

this is hard :I

[teukiesu]

:'DDD

I'M SORRY ;;;; I'M NOT ENGLISH AMG DON'T KILL ME ToT

yay more

“Are you the new guy? Zhou Mi?” he asked in perfect Mandarin and Zhou Mi raised an eyebrow. “You are Chinese, right? I'm Han Geng, they call me Hankyung around here though,” he nodded at his own words and untied his apron, throwing it carelessly on the floor. “Li Xu!” he called loudly, a pregnant silence following. Zhou Mi shifted uncomfortably and Han Geng let out a loud huff. “Ryeowook!” he yelled again and an even shorter - and when Zhou Mi said short, he meant this man was really, really short - male poked his head through the opening of the doorway. His eyes were wide and his face screamed innocence, high cheekbones and a small build. “Can you take care of dinner? I have to show the new guy around,” the man named Li Xu - or Ryeowook? Zhou Mi didn't know - nodded and pursed his lips, seeming to be thinking of something as he abruptly disappeared

[mertlekang]

He's what we call he eternal youngest. He doesn't really age, and god that boy...”
>
He's what we call the eternal youngest. He doesn't really age, and God, that boy...”

'demanded to get Kyuhyun kicked out. Unfortunately, Kyuhyun is practically a god at what he does so we couldn't kick him out.'
try something else instead of 'kick him out', 'cos you used kicked out in the previous sentence.
(Get rid of him, dispose of him, blah blah)

Now, that was an underestimate.
*Now, that was an underestimation.

'Thoughts swarmed in Han Geng's head. Sungmin or Cheng Min? What was he supposed to call him?'
Is that meant to be Geng, or Zhoumi? Kinda confused me idk if I'm wrong, though. :I

;a; This is so good, why are you so good at moving a story along?
And I love how confused Zhoumi is :U