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For lizzylove4ever, "Alone Together" by greenisbeauty

Jan 04, 2010 11:36

Title: Alone Together
Author:greenisbeauty
Rating: PG-13
Notes: None of these characters belong to me. So props to Disney!
Pairing: Jack/Elizabeth
Option: #1- Pre-AWE fluff
Summary: Another missing scene from the island. A sort of continuation, if you please. :)

For lizzylove4ever

( It had been no more than an hour since they collapsed together onto the sand, two empty bottles of rum scattered beside them. Elizabeth had fallen asleep only briefly, lying beneath the stars, her head resting upon Jack’s chest, his steady heart providing her with more warmth and solace than the rum. )

recipient: lizzylove4ever, author: greenisbeauty

Comments 4

veronica_rich January 4 2010, 21:42:22 UTC

All that's missing is Jack loudly snoring and scratching himself to completely shatter her illusions, eh? LOL!

I like her idea of scandal. Boy, is that about to change! Your story is quite humorous and fun.

greenisbeauty January 5 2010, 07:03:13 UTC

All that's missing is Jack loudly snoring and scratching himself to completely shatter her illusions, eh? LOL!

Seriously! I think she gets a bit caught up in the magic of the rum and Jack's persona and in a way when she tells Jack that it's time to return to reality, she's really telling that to herself. Time to wake up to the fact that Jack is really, at the end of it all, just Jack. :P

I like her idea of scandal. Boy, is that about to change!

I think that's why I love Elizabeth so much. She possibly changes the most out of all three main characters throughout the films. That is, of course, my most humble opinion. ;)

Thanks for your thoughtful comments!

lizzylove4ever January 10 2010, 21:02:02 UTC

Thank you so much!!! I love my present! I hope you did too! Question...have you written other stuff like this? If so I would love to read it! If you liked my story too, I'm working on one on fanfiction, if you want to check it out.

greenisbeauty January 20 2010, 08:34:46 UTC

Glad you liked it!

Loved my present! I write occasionally. I've written a few other Sparrabeth stories. You can check them out here: http://greenisbeauty.livejournal.com/tag/sparrabeth

Hope you enjoy!