He curved his thin lips into a smile and tapped the cigarette against the edge of the round wrought iron table. "You're wasting time."
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Love the retelling of Persephone & Hades (natch, since that's what my novel is about, sort of). Appropriately sexy & disturbing. I've sometimes wondered whether Hades missed her when she was gone for the summer. :) Also liked how you tied him to smoke, and her to sunlight.
Thanks. I <3 Hades and Persephone, too. I've written a bunch of stories about them, in various forms, and love reading them, too. This is the first I've posted here, though. I should do it more.
I like finding words and phrases I haven't thought of using. Simple ones, but they work well. These -- bubble of sunlight, fanned my fingers. I used to think smoking was sexy. I liked the smell of burnt matches, and then everyone had a bic lighter and I ended up with a smokers cough, and I don't smoke.
I can't smoke, personally, and hate everything about the smell, and it's pretty stupid to smoke because it's bad for you and kills everyone around you, too.
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... that doesn't seem right.
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LOL
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But... it's sexy. And the Devil thinks so, too.
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