Heh - I think I used the word "feel" in some form about 15 times. I kept trying to take it out because ACK REPETITION by then my lizard brain would kick in and remind me "no, that's what the story's about, numbnuts."
'“Jesus.” I shook my head.' This made me laugh. 'He did die, just a little.' This made me laugh as well. I love women. I love the power they have. Men seduce or take this power because they're afraid. The one word sentence 'Life.', breathtaking, confronting.
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Plus, He did die, just a little. Cue hugely inappropriate laughter that's impossible to explain to anyone else :D
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And woo for hugely inappropriate laughter!!!! :D
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This made me laugh as well. I love women. I love the power they have. Men seduce or take this power because they're afraid. The one word sentence 'Life.', breathtaking, confronting.
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