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brenbell April 25 2011, 19:01:48 UTC
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the mixture of zombies and murder. I like the quick moving not quite dead way you make your zombies (it makes them scarier).

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carrie_ryan April 25 2011, 22:24:18 UTC
Thanks! Though I should have noted that this technically isn't canon in my world -- my zombies can't talk :)

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brenbell April 26 2011, 20:19:53 UTC
I still thought they were cool (in a scary way) :-)

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ladybluestar April 25 2011, 21:14:59 UTC
Great story and I really like the struggle she has with feelings of inferiority. Also, having to kill him twice and then realizing that she had inadvertently killed herself was wonderful.

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carrie_ryan April 25 2011, 22:24:32 UTC
YAY! Glad you liked that part! Thanks!

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claire8sterling April 26 2011, 02:00:03 UTC
*shudder*

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chant_1 April 26 2011, 11:54:26 UTC
Loved this! Bleak and despairing, and yet awesome. I was surprised by his ability to speak, too...definitely a departure for you and the zombie world. Thanks for sharing!!

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Wow ext_315608 April 29 2011, 18:50:38 UTC
Carrie, this story was so good! Loved it!

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