Fiction by Brenna: Visited on the Son

[brennayovanoff]

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[brennayovanoff]

:D I figured if a reader got past that line, they could handle anything else the story threw at them. Threw. At them.

(Puns are stupid. And yet somehow, I can't resist.)

[ljboldyrev]

Wow. Such a unique character and voice! And so many great lines.

[brennayovanoff]

Thanks :D Sadly, I suspect I've barely scratched the surface on this guy (As always, started with the idea of, "Oh, this will be SO straightforward!")

[chant_1]

WOW. I am blown away - in a good way. Thoughtful and dark and different! Amazing.

[brennayovanoff]

Thanks! Every now and then, I write something that freaks me right out :)

[anonymous]

Wooooow. I love this. (I think I understand that last line, but I'm not to sure...) The tone of this is just fantastic and really made me get into it. Also, I see that last night's live chat suggestion of rainbows and laughter did little to sway you. ;)

[brennayovanoff]

I see that last night's live chat suggestion of rainbows and laughter did little to sway you

Hah-Jackson neglected to relay the message and gave me no such suggestions! Although . . . I was originally planning a very uncharacteristic Valentines story for this week. And then I started writing it. And then it seemed not so much romantic as traumatizing. Aaaaand, here we all are.

[simonhay_healer]

Wow! I love the voice. At first I thought the mc was a girl and a ghost. There were so many good lines. Sometimes the line between doing what's right and what's needed is blurred. Today, this story is my favourite. I now feel like returning to my wip and looking at how I describe scenes and emotions.

[brennayovanoff]

Sometimes the line between doing what's right and what's needed is blurred

This is one of my most recurring ideas-I'm so interested in showing people making those hard choices, because they say a lot about the character that they might not say in words.