That was incredibly hot. And incredibly vivid. There's so many details in there that just bring the whole thing into sharp focus, so I could really SEE it. It was almost blush-making because of that.
Awesome. (please note the incoherence - that's your fault!)
DAMN. *drools* I-I-I.... I thought Jared wanted to have Jensen make Jared make him come, that didn't happen. I'm not complaining though, I loved the sex. God the buttsex was HOT! *flails* I'm going to bed now, to dream happy dreams. Thank You! *hugs* *falls asleep*
Thanks for that lovely comment - I'm particularly happy to hear that the buttsex worked for you, because I've never written it before! I hope your dreams were good :) *hugs back*
You made me think of using a Goldenhorse song, so I thought I should acknowledge that. My very favourite Goldenhorse song is 'golden dawn'. I'm planning to write a morning sex fic sometime soon, and that song is definitely going to be in it :)
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*fans self*
Holy CRAP.
That was incredibly hot. And incredibly vivid. There's so many details in there that just bring the whole thing into sharp focus, so I could really SEE it. It was almost blush-making because of that.
Awesome.
(please note the incoherence - that's your fault!)
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I sometimes worry that there's too much detail, that it gets in the way of the flow, so it's good to hear that you liked that aspect.
Hee, I made you incoherent - uhh, my bad? ;-)
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that was good
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Comment ... First need to check where my brain leaked down cuz ... Holy Hell, that was so hot and so vivid !!!
Amazing update !!!
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These lines are like a drug. I read impatiently sentence after sentence because each contains a new unexpected pleasure.
The Goldenhorse track helped me coming down after my fic-high. Btw. as I saw my name I turned as red as Jareds ass. Thanks :)
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You made me think of using a Goldenhorse song, so I thought I should acknowledge that. My very favourite Goldenhorse song is 'golden dawn'. I'm planning to write a morning sex fic sometime soon, and that song is definitely going to be in it :)
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