fic: the thaw (NC-17)

[rurounihime]

Title: The Thaw
Author: rurounihime
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He wasn’t breathing. He just… wasn’t. (written for this prompt.)
Disclaimer: The Merlin universe does not belong to me, nor does it make me any money. All characters over 18.

A/N: no spoilers

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Comments

[phreakycat]

Wow, that was great! You wrote protective!Arthur SO well - very desperate and loving but absolutely in character (IMO). Well done!

[rurounihime]

Ahaha, thank you! I'm so glad Arthur worked for you in this one. That's a wonderful compliment to receive! ^__^

[mystico_tala]

Wow, beautifully written. I think I was holding my breath through half of it. Very emotionally intense.

[rurounihime]

Ooh, thank you so much for getting so into the story! I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it. ^__^

[mithrel]

Wow. This whole thing was visceral and raw, with the desperation throughout, Arthur not believing Merlin was alive even though he was right there. Well done!

[rurounihime]

I LOVE the words "visceral" and "raw". Haha, thank you so much for using them to describe my fic! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story.

[frakkin_addict]

This was absolutely gorgeous! The Fear, the cold, the desperation, the desire; the emotions were all captured so beautifully. I was completely drawn into this story. Fantastic job. :)

[rurounihime]

Thank you so much for reading, and for leaving such a nice, heartfelt comment! I'm so glad you liked the story.

[lishel_fracrium]

*adds to memories*

[rurounihime]

Awww! Thank you!