Initiation - ( first kiss)

[rowennagal]

Title: Initiation
Author: rowennagal
Pairing:merlin/arthur
Rating: nc-17 (pretty mild)
Disclaimer: merlin is not mine =(
Summary: Merlin is away with Arthur & the knights of Camelot on a hunting expedition when he finds himself getting more enjoyment than he would believe possible from the trip. 
Notes: A wee fic in response to the cute prompt - first

Comments

[givemethebook]

This was just too cute!

[rowennagal]

cheers, yeah the boys are sweet together :)

[ravencostello]

Other than the lower case "i"'s running throughout ("I'm not laughing at you Merlin...what do you think i am thinking right now?" - the first 'I' is okay, as it's at the beginning of the sentance it's easier to pick up on them. But the second should also be CAP'd) this was an enjoyable fic to read.

[rowennagal]

Thanks for that :D x

[starrienite]

That was adorable!! Lovely first kiss and I love how Arthur *still* manages to be an arrogant prat whilst being all yummy at the same time...gah to him! lol

Just a couple of things:

Determined to bring Merlin to the same state, he slid his hand under the other man's waistband to grasp Merlin cock.

'Merlin cock' needs a 's to indicate its his...er...well...cock...lol *blushblush*

And also, I was wondering how Arthur could pat Merlins back whilst Merlin is still sprawled on the ground...? Not that I have *anything* against the boys patting each other cause *purr* *__* but yes *ahem*

Anyhoo - really, lovely piece! Merlin and his ears *heee* adorable!

[rowennagal]

thanks, let me know what you think of my attempts to make more sense of this.
:D

[babydracky]

I'm pretty sure that WE will love it! ;)
Well done!

And I like the reference of the place where Merlin should have seen Viviane for the first time and having instead of a beautiful blond woman and really gorgeous prince! ;)))

[eosrose]

Loved it!

[rowennagal]

Thankyou :D