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Fic: Naming the Future

Sep 25, 2009 23:39

Title: Naming the Future
Author: Stella Wind
Prompt image no.: 65, 69, 18
Rating: PG
Length: 1905 words
Summary: Lancelot brings Mordred to Merlin, asking for help, and Merlin must find a way to deal with the one he's been told will kill Arthur.
Warnings/Spoilers: All of season 1
Author's notes: I'm rather afraid that next episode will render this AU. My ( Read more... )

genre: au, gen: mordred, author: stellawind, rating: pg, length: short, gen: lancelot, gen: merlin

Comments 4

archaeologist_d September 27 2009, 23:57:31 UTC

That's cool that Merlin renamed him Emrys. That would certainly change things. I also liked that Lance would be taking care of him. Good job with this.

starzangel1 September 28 2009, 16:51:31 UTC

I like how you had Merlin try to avert the dragon's prophecy about Mordred. And Arthur oblivious as always was a nice touch at the end.

yue_ix September 30 2009, 13:41:18 UTC

That was a very interesting take on the possible future, and a most encouraging one.
Merlin picked him up, sweeping his bangs to one side, almost feeling the future shift.
This, to me, recaps it all best. Merlin is torn about destiny, intuitive and caring all at once. Thank you for sharing this with us!

phoenixacid October 1 2009, 12:30:05 UTC

I really like how Merlin changed Mordred's destiny and ensured Arthur's survival in the future! Very interesting story. :)