'The Pendant of Jebrah', story, prompt images #3 & #85

Sep 25, 2009 22:20



Part II

In Gaius’s chambers, the court physician hunted through his books for information on Jebrah. He hadn’t bothered looking up the Lycaeides Ygraineus butterflies, for aside from their flickering appearance, he had another good reason to suspect magic was involved.

“Jebrah was not only an explorer, but also a sorcerer,” Gaius confided in ( Read more... )

rating: g, gen: arthur, round: one, length: short, author: starzangel1, genre: angst

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archaeologist_d September 27 2009, 01:30:37 UTC
I loved the giant butterflies. Even something that harmless can be destructive at that size. Good job with this.

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starzangel1 September 27 2009, 11:00:54 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't sure how well the giant butterflies worked, so it's great to hear you liked them.

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phoenixacid September 27 2009, 03:29:09 UTC
I thought the start was very compelling and I really liked the feel of the fic - It felt like it could be a part of a Merlin episode. I also really adored the giant butterflies too. :)

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starzangel1 September 27 2009, 11:01:43 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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kitg September 29 2009, 03:01:49 UTC
hehe loved it. nearly choked on my tea when it turned out to be butterflies. Shame you didn't get Uthers reaction to it all. would have been comical XD

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starzangel1 September 30 2009, 09:20:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lol yeah, Uther's reaction would've been amusing.

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starzangel1 November 2 2009, 16:16:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It's so annoying when the BBC put sport on instead, I'm pleased to have helped pass your wait for the next episode.

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blue_angel1 May 21 2010, 07:18:18 UTC
Well done! I love a well written character, and you managed to preserve the reactions that I would have expected out of each of them. I'm not much for stories that change the character to a point that the actors and actresses themselves would have a hard time recognizing their own character. This was a fun read, wish there'd been more!

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