Obeisance by casspeach

[casspeach]

Fic title: Obeisance
Author: casspeach
Beta: montanaharper
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5841
Warnings/Spoilers: none

Summary:

Comments

[vanishing_cake]

Your fic got recced SO fast. Good thing, because it's a gem, well written and focused and too sweet to be allowed. Protective! Arthur is made of win. Protective and a little bit in denial Arthur? THERE ARE NO WORDS.

Can't pick a favorite part, because the whole thing is good--Merlin-mothering much loved, challenge was just right, fight was good, and the token kiss? Icing on the cake of awesomeness. You handled the characters just right, captured that awkward, earnest way they both have (though Merlin to a lesser extent) of being manly, or whatever. You know.

[casspeach]

It did? Cool!

Protective and a little bit in denial Arthur?

Yes! This!

I love Arthur to a kind of ridiculous degree.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for your lovely comment!

[pippopippo]

Love it. :)

[casspeach]

Thank you!

[clancy_s]

Love it - protective Arthur, very convincing characterisation for all the main characters and the villain gets his comeuppance.

[casspeach]

Thank you! I'm glad the characterisation worked for you.

Thanks for commenting.

[vaudevilles]

Oh that's LOVELY. Your Arthur has just the right mix of bluster and arrogance and deep caring.

[casspeach]

I really do love Arthur and his multifacetedness, and yes, ultimately deep caring which underlies it all.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.

[seperis]

That was *perfect*.

[casspeach]

Thank you!