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Ceremony of Innocence by snarkydame

Mar 12, 2009 06:51

Title: Ceremony of Innocence
Author: snarkydame
Rating: R
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: 2200
Spoilers: None to speak of.
Notes: Thanks to deltacephei and tacitus_3 for fine and speedy beta work.

Summary: To take someone out of their alloted time, and let them live in another, one must let the world break.

( The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere The ceremony of innocence is drowned )

anachronism challenge

Comments 90

;_; lilian_cho March 12 2009, 13:09:15 UTC

Ouch.

*cries*

Re: ;_; lilian_cho March 12 2009, 13:11:09 UTC

BTW you have < em > < / em > on your lj-cut.

Re: ;_; snarkydame March 12 2009, 19:34:15 UTC

Oops! Thank you. And I'm sorry I made you cry! *g*

Re: ;_; lilian_cho March 12 2009, 19:50:08 UTC

It's HAPPY TEARS because Merlin found his prince again! Who cares about the bloodbath WAHHH not me! *sniffles*

mamadeb March 12 2009, 13:34:27 UTC

Beautifully done - it felt dreamlike and disjointed, the way that broken world was, and you let the reader figure out what was different.

I'm going to recommend this story.

snarkydame March 12 2009, 19:34:56 UTC

Wow! Thank you.

lamardeuse March 12 2009, 13:50:37 UTC

Oh, wow. This is beautiful, and achy in all the right ways.

snarkydame March 12 2009, 19:35:38 UTC

Achy! I like that. Thank you!

wendynever March 12 2009, 13:56:48 UTC

Yes- um yes. *tries for more coherent words* Yes.

Thank you.

snarkydame March 12 2009, 19:36:20 UTC

No, thank you! *beams*

takadainmate March 12 2009, 14:18:27 UTC

Gorgeous. The story was heartbreaking and wonderful and beautifully executed. Thank you so much for sharing!

snarkydame March 12 2009, 19:37:06 UTC

heee! What a lovely comment! Thanks.