Chrysalis by halotolerant

Jan 13, 2009 19:55


I was so pleased to find a flashfic comm for this fandom - hello all! I like to delurk with fic, so here it is:

Title: Chrysalis
Rating: R
Words: ~2,800
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Notes: For the Transformation challenge. Thank you to elfwhistletree for another ace beta in yet another fandom.
Summary: Transformation isn't painless

It is perfectly dark. Arthur can't move and he can't breathe. )

transformation challenge

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cinnamingirl January 16 2009, 15:59:00 UTC
That was absolutely gorgeous. I mean, I am a fan of smut and all (Who doesn't love a good ship fic?), but that was just beautiful writing. Thank you so much.

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halotolerant January 16 2009, 21:08:49 UTC
*blushes* you're very welome! Thank you for feeding back, I'm very glad you enjoyed it *g*

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ravenclaw_harpy January 17 2009, 11:48:51 UTC
I loved this fic so much - even though I've used up several tissues - especially its circular movement and the give and take between Arthur and Merlin.

My favourite lines:

“You cannot lose me.” Merlin’s voice had gone very low and definite.

Arthur couldn’t keep the grin from his lips - Merlin got them too easily from him. “And yet I cannot have you.”

Whimper.

I'm off to buy some stocks in a tissue manufacturing firm and then rec this, because it so deserves to be read.

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halotolerant January 18 2009, 14:55:52 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm very pleased to hear you enjoyed it so much, cheers for feeding back and the rec *blushes*
*g*

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rach_padfoot February 17 2009, 18:07:27 UTC
Oh, that was fantastic. I'm breathless. Wonderful <3

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halotolerant February 17 2009, 22:27:33 UTC
Thank you're, that's very sweet! I'm so glad you enjoyed *g*

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