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Revelation, by Suaine

Jan 13, 2009 13:44

Title: Revelation
Author: suaine
Characters: Uther, Arthur & Merlin
Summary: Merlin does something stupidly brave with magic. This is the aftermath.
Notes: for the Transformation challenge.

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Comments 20

solar_cat January 13 2009, 13:07:07 UTC

GUH. What a way to start a morning! That was fantastic, and I love your Uther to the point where I think it might really become a problem for me. XD

such_heights January 13 2009, 13:36:35 UTC

Oh wow, that's so perfect and a little chilling and a lot exciting for the future. The last line is absolutely brilliant!

ubastira January 13 2009, 13:48:49 UTC

wow! this is. wow!

duskwillow January 13 2009, 14:20:50 UTC

I wow, I love how your write Uther!

entropical87 January 13 2009, 17:47:03 UTC

Your Uther is fascinating, with all his history brought into play.

For a terrible second Uther could imagine his son burning, the fire high and hot on his skin, smoke curling around his face, agony and fear, and the smell of pine.

I loved that line in particular, the small detail of the pine. Fantastic.