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Jul 13, 2008 18:27

title: experimental game, pairings: heero/duo, (implied) trowa/quatre, relena/hilde (sort of), warnings: shoujo ai (that's girl-love, non-yuri), BL, language
notes: written for the hell of it, most of it during the writathon (12 hrs sunday, 7/13), and completely inspired by katy perry's i kissed a girl (this is a download link for the song).

i kissed a girl and i liked it... the taste of her cherry chapstick )

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okaasan59 July 14 2008, 05:53:34 UTC
Damn! Girlfriend got to kiss Hilde, Duo AND Heero! *high fives Relena* You go, girl!

(icon Duo is still not sure this was a good idea) ^____^

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merith July 14 2008, 11:42:48 UTC
isn't she the lucky one? ;) course, duo and heero were residual, and duo's confusion a bonus. (he'll definitely be careful of making monsters in the future.)

thanks for reading!

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wickedgameff July 14 2008, 06:28:30 UTC
loved it! :-)

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merith July 14 2008, 11:43:14 UTC
thanks! i'm glad you did. :)

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sharona1x2 July 14 2008, 07:26:13 UTC
I'm not really into f/f stuff, but I still enjoyed this a lot. You managed to make the situation believable, which isn't that easy to do (at least for me). I liked everyone in this. One of my favorite parts was actually Relena dancing with Trowa. That was hot.

'Classified' and 'git' had me smiling. ^_____^

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merith July 14 2008, 11:46:59 UTC
*hugs*

i was trying to not make it too f/f, but more a curiosity and an interest sort of story. of course, you add a good dose of heero and duo to it, and yeah, makes it ever so much nicer. ;)

hmmm, dancing with trowa would be very hot, i'm thinking.

hee!! there are words that will always be used with the utmost respect and affection. those are two of them, and i don't know that i get the chance to use them enough. ;)

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ravensilver July 14 2008, 08:50:58 UTC
That was a nice Monday morning read! ^^

Good flow to the story. I also like a more human Relena, even though she's not my favourite character. But seeing that she's usually portrayed as a total b**ch, I liked this a lot. Of course it had to be Duo to come up with the idea of a "teenager" party - even if none of them really qualify for the lable of 'normal' teenager. It's good to see that Relena will allow herself new experiences - even if they were quite different from what she expected.

Very nice 'slice of life' story. Thank you. :)

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merith July 14 2008, 11:51:44 UTC
oh thank you so much for reading! :)

yeah, i know relena isn't a favorite character for many people, and is in fact, more of a favorite character to hate, but i like writing her anyway. i really do enjoy a good relena and the boys getting along story.

duo means well, but i think sometimes his ideas take over, and things get a bit out of his control... but that usually leads to ever so much more fun!

thanks again, and i'm glad you liked it!

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ralphiere July 14 2008, 17:19:05 UTC
Oh, Mer, this is great! Poor Duo, panicking when things get out of hand! *pets him* I think you were right on point! *cheers*

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merith July 14 2008, 22:21:32 UTC
thanks! hehe... yeah, i just love how cute and flustered duo can get.

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