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kelkatan February 19 2008, 19:27:19 UTC
Heero intuitively knew how much it meant to Duo, and his understanding speaks volumes, as well as Duo's subtle way of letting Heero know that his opinion on the matter was as important as the matter itself. Such a treat this is!

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merith February 19 2008, 21:41:49 UTC
*nods* yep! he 'sees through you' ...knows duo in the way that only heero can. :)

thanks for reading! i'm very happy you're liking the piece.

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merith February 19 2008, 23:59:18 UTC
oh me too! i mean, duo and cold cases would work very well. and heero would support duo in that hands down!

oh thank you les!! i confess, i'm really enjoying writing them, and might continue into another table after the feb challenge is over. this series at least... i can see so much more for heero and duo in this universe. :) and it's me writing them in a police series! i've always wanted to do that, but thought it'd take far too much time and effort (that i don't really have these days).

thank you for reading!

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salamandere February 19 2008, 22:45:37 UTC
oooooh this was was so extra awesome!! (i mean they all are, but this hit all my happy buttons =D) I LOOOVE how Duo knows exactly where to find heero randomly at lunch, how he just eats up half heero's food and sits beside him so comfortably and how he made this special trip out just to kind of get heero's reaction/approval of his decision--but i love that the decision is already made. they're soooo good for each other, aren't they? ^___________________^

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merith February 20 2008, 00:02:28 UTC
heh, well, duo knows that heero eats with his partner most days, and i'm sure heero said something about having to go to 'that place' again. ;) so, duo knew where he'd be... (actually, duo has a homing device hidden on heero and he just zero's in on it whenever he wants him!)

oh and i just love it when one of the boys eats the other's food -- heero typically steals duo's fries because they're bad for the body, so heero doesn't order them. but he likes them, so he takes a few from duo's plate. ;) duo's not shy, and unless it's someplace swanky, he'll eat from heero's plate -- if heero doesn't poke him with a fork for trying first.

*snugs* thanks for reading!

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sunhawk16 February 19 2008, 23:00:27 UTC
Ah, sweet! They're so easy around each other. ^____^ I like the idea of Duo going into that line of work, and am pleased that Montoya is sticking with the series. ^___~ You're doing really great with this writing challenge! *hugs*

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merith February 20 2008, 00:04:33 UTC
*nods* when montoya first came onto the scene, i wanted her to stick around... sort of be the girl side kick i like duo to have... like hilde but without the history (that can get in the way).

thanks sunny! *hugs* i'm really enjoying writing these! in fact, i'm thinking of continuing this universe with other 5 sentence fic tables. keeps me writing, and writing begets more writing... and that's a good thing.

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sunhawk16 February 20 2008, 00:19:21 UTC
*nod nod* A very good thing. ^____^

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merith February 20 2008, 00:27:10 UTC
*pokes* so... you writing something else? :)

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tyreling August 25 2008, 02:16:39 UTC
Nice~! :D I love the easy flow of words that say so much in just a few sentences.

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merith August 25 2008, 03:33:47 UTC
i played a bit fast and loose with some grammar, but i like the way the stories came out. :)

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