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[merexcursion]

The evening horizon swirls pink, blue
and greys,

the greys I know, but

the others taunt me
with their pleasantry.

Forlorn shadows stretch out to form
a path aside,

familiar,

yet here I stand
in the foreign glow
of a failing sun,

waiting...

Comments

[asakiyume]

This is just beautiful. Really lovely. The melancholy is intense, and real.

[merexcursion]

thanks!

[salyey_marya]

so beautiful verse.

i can see it all :)

[merexcursion]

thanks!